October 31, 2006
We have finished the audio museum (YEA!!) and you will be listening to your file and those of your classmates during class. Please evaluate the project by responding these questions :
-What parts did you do really well?
-What parts did you struggle with?
-What component did you most enjoy working on?
-How could the project be improved?
October 31st, 2006 at 11:54 am
I did well in doing my writting piece.
I did bad in doing recrding beacause i said words twice and i said it to slow.
I enjoyed writting my piece because i like to write stuff like that.
I could improve by recording better and writting more stuff in my writting piece.
October 31st, 2006 at 11:55 am
I think I did realy did well on the writing.I mostly strugled with the recording.I enjoyed working on the recording.To give us more time to type.
October 31st, 2006 at 11:57 am
I really liked this whole expiriance. It was very fun to do all of this. I think I did pretty good with the recording and the writing of my piece. Really the only hard thing to do was all that editing and revising. As you may know, I am really not a person who cridicises herself and changes things. But the changes I DID make I think really helped my story. When you listen to it, it is a lot easier to understand. I think that maybe I should work on making my pieces shorter. This one was 3:19!!! I tend to put in things that really don’t need to be there. And then I tend to have an idea that conects to the other thing and I just go on and on and on and.. oops!! I think I am doing it now!! All in all, I really liked this prodject.
October 31st, 2006 at 11:58 am
I think I did really well in dawing the pictures because I am happy with the drawings that I made.
I struggled with makeing the web because it was hard to find infomation on the picture because all they talked about was the arties.I could inprove on takeing more time on working .
October 31st, 2006 at 11:58 am
i ejoyed garage band the best because it was fun recording.I also did well on my story, it was fun.The one thing that I did not do well on was my meida refiection.I did not like that either.I could also do better on that.
October 31st, 2006 at 11:59 am
I think what I did well was making up the story. When I see a painting a beautifull poem comes to mind, although I did not write a poem I;m probably going to in the future. I would love to make pne that could make someone cry because it’s so beautifull. I feel that recording was my weekness. I feel my vioce is not strong enough to be able to be heard. I’m a small creature in this big world. I loved working on picking out a jingle!:-) I feel I picked the right one for the right story. My project could be better if I would try to come out of my funny shell and enter to a new world.
October 31st, 2006 at 12:00 pm
I think what I did weel is that I made my story a very mysterious story which is kindof like what I wanted my story to be and I think I described it very well.The parts I mostly struggled with was the parts when I had to think of new Ideas for chapte one and chapter two but I moved along.The part that I componented the most was the part when I had to write the actuall story and type it up on the computer ’cause I love to write alot.
October 31st, 2006 at 12:00 pm
What i did realy well was remebering what to say and ho to say it. The parts i struggled with where saying it loud enofe and finding the right jingle to go along with it to make it sound even better. I most enjoed makeing the story and recording it it was very exiceding to know that i was all done and redy to record.
October 31st, 2006 at 12:00 pm
I liked my story very much it was really good. The part I liked alot was when I told the dogs name’s the one named Hogan was my real dog and Maxwell I made him up it would have been Sam. The part I hated was my voice I think I kind of sounded like it’s not me at all it’s a whole nother person. But I think I did better writing than recording. I would probably change my voice and make the sound better so the sound like it’s really happining so the listener would not be bored.
October 31st, 2006 at 12:01 pm
I think I talked well.I also think I did well writing my piece.I don’t think I strugeld with eny parts.I enjoyed recording too. I could improve my piece by makeing my poem beter.
October 31st, 2006 at 12:01 pm
I did really well when we recorded because I went right through it and for
what I thought it sounded good. I struggled with typing because I am a
really slow typer. I liked reacording because you got to choose your own
jingle.
October 31st, 2006 at 12:01 pm
I picked a jingle really easly because I am good at picking a them and sticking with it.
I didn’t do so well with my recording.
I enjoyed finding a jingle
October 31st, 2006 at 12:02 pm
I thought I did pretty well. I thought I had a good story and I did good on anunseating my words. But what I stunk at was talking into the mike. I was holding it and speaking to close. That made the hole story sound staticy so you could not hear me well. So next time I wil back away from the mike when I ama talking. Anouther thing that I had truble with was the noice. People were talking so there was a lot of back round noice. But overall I really liked the hole project.
I have more to say but I did not finish.
October 31st, 2006 at 12:02 pm
My favorite part of this project was definetly the recording and working with garageband. I’ve always enjoyed playing around with computers. What I found really hard was writing the poem. I always get stuck when it comes to thinking of ideas for a piece of writing. The part I think I did well on was COPS (conventions, orginization, puncuation, and spelling.)
I don’t think the project can be changed any way to make it better. It was really fun.
October 31st, 2006 at 12:03 pm
i think the part i did the best was the drawing and writing because i do not think that my voice was clear at all. my drawings were the best i have ever made and i thought that my story was good and funny too.
i think i struggled with my story the most because i hade to rewright the story over and over again because it didn’t make sence but in the end i realluy liked it.
i definitly loved the drawing part because last year we missed a lot of art because we had it on fridays. and art is one of my favorite subjects because you get to do what you want to every single time. but i also enjoyed the garage band because you got to pick the music and record your voice and i LOVE to talk love it love it love it. thats because i have so many ideas and i like to share every single one of them that’s why i like to work in groups.
i think i could have improved by making my voice clearer.
October 31st, 2006 at 12:03 pm
I think that I did a good job with writing my piece to go with the artwork. I wasn’t so sure of drawing the piece though. I think I liked writing the writing piece the most! I think maybe if people all did shorter pieces that only needed a day or two to write and a little less editing so that we could get all the recording done sooner!
This progect was awesome!
October 31st, 2006 at 12:04 pm
I did well in recording the story and it also i think was the best part of it also I liked scetching the painting.I think that the project could have been better by me writing more.Thats is what I think I strugled with.I also think it was fun when wee got to scetch the painting and using different medias to do it!!
November 2nd, 2006 at 11:36 am
I think I did the Jingles Really well.
The parts that I struggled with were the poem.
The componet I enjoyed working with was the jinglesa and mixing them.
The project could be improved by making my story longer and speaking up.
November 2nd, 2006 at 11:37 am
I think that I did a pretty good job at recording the story and finding the jingles.
I struggled with trying to think of an idea for my story but I enjoyed writing it.
I liked working with Garage Band because I liked to record and pick jingles.
I think that I could have been a little louder reading the story.
November 2nd, 2006 at 11:37 am
I think I did my recording really well. I think i stuggled with typing my media reflections. Working on the computers!!!! Do more recording then just the intro and story you could do a concution.
November 2nd, 2006 at 11:38 am
#1 I think that I put grate music in my story
#2 I think that I struggled with the saveing the music
#3 I most enjoyed the music
#4 I think that nothing went bade
November 2nd, 2006 at 11:38 am
I picked really good songs for my piece
speaking loud into the mike
the garageband songs
i think that we should be in a quiet room to record, so that other people can’t but in
November 2nd, 2006 at 11:39 am
I think that I read my piece really well and I think that my voice flowed really nicely. The part that I really struggled with is how loud the music should be. I most enjoyed picking jingles on GarageBand. There are a ton to choose from! The piece could be improved if I toned down the music a bit.
November 2nd, 2006 at 11:40 am
I think I did really well speaking loud into the microphone and reading my peice into the microphone. I think I struggled with connecting the intro with the piece. I enjoyed working on finding music and listening to the music. To improve the piece i think i should have made the poem rhyme then it would have made it better.
November 2nd, 2006 at 11:41 am
i chose music that was suitable for this type of picture. It wasn’t very easy for me because I hadn’t used garage band before. I most enjoyed the jingles. The project could be improved by teaching people how to use the jingles and recording before they try to complete the project.
November 2nd, 2006 at 11:43 am
I did well at speaking loudly and pronouncing.
At one part I said somthing that wasn’t in the story and at another part I got too close to the micriphone.
I had fun working on jingles!!!
Not getting too close to the mic. and reading ONLY was is in the story.
-Megan
November 2nd, 2006 at 11:44 am
I did really well in being loud and clear
I struggled with finding the right music to go with my poem
I liked recording my poem the most
I think i could have better music
November 2nd, 2006 at 11:44 am
The parts I thought that I did really well was my voice because I thought that anyoe could here me and I thought that my music that I picked went well with my piece.The parts that I struggled with would probably be actually picking the music for my piece because there was so many chioces. The one piece that I most enjoyed doing was the colored pencils because it was the best one that came out and it isn’t messy.I think what I could have improved on is I could have gone a little bit farther with my iece to make it a little bit more well better.
November 2nd, 2006 at 11:44 am
I think I did well writting a long enough piece to be a minute (some other pieces I listened to were only 30 seconds.
I think I strugled with reading my fiinal piece since there was so much niose in the back round.
I MOST enjoyed reading my intro and piece on Garge Band, it was sooo fun I wish I had Garge Band at my house!
I think we should spend more time on recoreding the piece and less on the intro!!!!!
November 2nd, 2006 at 11:46 am
I thought i did my recording really well with good voice.I had a hard time coming up with a jingle that was good for my piece buy it was fun finding it.I liked doing garage band because we could make it aby way we want. It could be improved on every thing because it can always get better but i could have improved the most on my jingle because i did not like it alot!
November 2nd, 2006 at 11:48 am
I PERSONALLY thought Aimme’s and Emma’s podcasts were WAY better than mine!
I think I had a PERFECT song/jingle!
I struggled with hear my thing!!! it wont turn it down.
I enjoyed my jingels and my cow moo !
Everything exept my jingels.
November 2nd, 2006 at 11:49 am
I think I was good at speaking clearly because when I listened to my podcast I understood what I was saying. I struggled at speaking loud enough because when I played my podcast I mostly only heard the music instead of my voice. If we did this again I would try to speak louder(and with a little more emotion). The component I liked working on the most was choosing and listening to the jingles because it was fun to see what jingle would match my story.I don’t think that this project should be improved because I liked it the way it was and it was really fun to record our stories on itunes:)
November 2nd, 2006 at 11:49 am
I think I did the recording really well, because I don’t think I messed up a lot and I think I did a good job on writing my piece.I struggled with getting the microphone to work for recording my introduction.I most liked working on choosing the jingle for my piece.I think this project was great the way it was and Mrs. Cheney did a great job with helping us!
November 2nd, 2006 at 11:52 am
I think I did a good job with my intro and spoke loud enough.
I think I struggled with my story and didn’t speak loud enough.
In this project I liked doing the intro the most.
I could improve this project by talking louder.
November 2nd, 2006 at 12:24 pm
I think the part I liked most was recording my piece and listening to it and to others. I struggled with reading with reading my piece out loud. I was nervous and didn’t want to read it in front of other kids. The part I did really well was my drawings. It seems like ages since I did it… I think that it doesn’t need to be improved. It was a good project! But it kind of long…
_Megan K._
November 2nd, 2006 at 12:25 pm
The part that I did really well was recording my piece. I had trouble making my piece longer. What I liked the best was recording my piece. It was fun when we listened to ourselves when we were all done. To improve this projecct, you could try to take students sepretly to record their piece. I had a good time doing this project.
November 2nd, 2006 at 12:27 pm
I did really well on recording my story. I didn’t mess up too much and I spoke clearly.I stuggled with trying to record the first time. The second time was the best.I enjoed drawing my art peice I really liked drawing all four pieces.I think I could have spoke with more exspresen.I think the time we got to finish was just the right time to me.
November 2nd, 2006 at 12:27 pm
I did well on my words for the piece and I also did well by picking the right kind of music.I struggled on my talking in the speaker phone and making my voice clear.I most enjoyed working with the artist piece and makinbg recordings about it.I think the project was a little hard because you had to do alot of steaps.Like getting your music and recoading next to a speaker phone.And some other things.
November 2nd, 2006 at 12:27 pm
I think that I was good at the music.
I struggled with my voice and I need to be loud.
I loved the drawing the most because it inspired me and intrested me by all the hard work and copying the art work…
I think we should have research more about the art work and the artist.
November 2nd, 2006 at 12:27 pm
I did really well on the voice recording. But I strugled on the starting and stoping. I enjoyed making the drawings the most. I should not studer as much.
November 2nd, 2006 at 12:28 pm
I did really well on recording my story. I didn’t mess up too much and I spoke clearly.I stuggled with trying to record the first time. The second time was the best.I enjoed drawing my art peice I really liked drawing all four pieces.I think I could have spoke with more exspresen.I think the time we got to finish was just the right time to me….
November 2nd, 2006 at 12:28 pm
I did really well with writing the story. I also had really good music with my piece. I struggled with recording the story and making it almost perfect to be recorded. It was also hard not to got to fast or to slow.
I really liked drawing the pieces and picking them out. It was cool to see all the different pieces of art.
I think the project could be improved by making it shorter and do stuff more together. One time I acually thought the whole project was over!
November 2nd, 2006 at 12:29 pm
I think I did really welll on my Meida drawing, because it was fun to draw all the 4 pictures that were needed. I sturggeld with the recording and the water color I had to do. I enjoyed working on the jingels because
I liked liusening to all the differet music and lising to insterment i did not even know of. This project could have not been impoved in any way it was the funnest project i have ever worked on. And it might as well be my favarte I have ever worked on. It has also might be my favorite project in 5 grade to far.
November 2nd, 2006 at 12:31 pm
I think that in my podcast I did well on the drama. I think I struggled with little if not nothing. I enjoyed everything but my favorite part was listening to all the jingles (music) and finaly choosing SOARING as my jingle (music). I think on the intro (begining) only one person should speak at one time because I heard some people say ” I’m done” at the end of my intro.
November 2nd, 2006 at 12:32 pm
I think I did okay but I did best in was the drawings. I think I struggled with the recording because I didn’ talk loud enough. I enjoyed picking the jingles the best. I think it could be improoved by more paintings to choose from.
November 2nd, 2006 at 12:33 pm
I think I did really well on the recording. I didn’t talk too loud or too quiet.
I think I struggled with remaking the pictures in 4 different ways. It was challenging making all the details.
The thing(s) I liked the best were finding the pictures I liked the best and finding the music I liked the best.
I think the project should be improved by not having to write and type our media reflections.(No media reflections!)
November 2nd, 2006 at 12:35 pm
I think I did really well on my four drawings because the teachers gave us a lot of time to work on them and we could do a quality job.
The hardest part for me was researching online to find info. about Daniel Merriam and my painting because the painting I drew was pretty new.
I really enjoyed drawing the four pictures and looking for them in books because you could pick any picture you wanted. You didn’t have to be assigned to a picture.
If the teachers were to change something next year, I would have them make the project a little shorter. Maybe not have to do the webs, but other wise I would keep the whole thing the same. It’s good practice for longer projects in the future years.
November 2nd, 2006 at 12:36 pm
The parts that I did really well was I did not doze off at the end of my sentences. I also pronoused my words very clear and loudly. The parts that I struggled with were that i spoke to close to the mike so letter “P” came out LOUD and clear. It heart my ears. My favorite thing I did I would say was the whole recording session. I love writing it, finding the music and actually recording the writing piece I wrote. The project could be improved by not going to the art musuam because when we went a lot people did not have their picture in the art musuam. For instance, me. My picture was not to be found in the musuam. But over all I loved the project. I also enjoyed the musuam even though my picture wasn’t in it. I found the artwork interesting and amazing to look at.
November 2nd, 2006 at 12:36 pm
1. I did a good job recording my writing piece and adding the jingles.I thought that the outcome was really good.
2. Everything was pretty hard to do.You had to everything done in a short amount of time.
3. I really liked workng on GarageBand because you got to record your writing piece and you could add music.You could also control how long you wanted the music to go and you had a lot of choices to pick from.
4. I would change the number of replicas you would have to make.i would make it a minimam of three paintings but you got more time to them all so you could make a lot more paintings.
November 2nd, 2006 at 12:37 pm
The part I did well is saying how I felt and how I said it.The part I had a hard time with is saying it.What I most enjoyed is saying what I needed to say.The project could be improved by maybe being a little shorter,quicker and no stops until the end.
November 2nd, 2006 at 12:38 pm
(1.) The part that I did the best was my craypaw drawing. I think I had really good shadow on the boats and bridge.
(2.) I had kind of a hard time on makeing the collage because I couldn’t find a bridge use, instead i had to make one out of paper. I also had a hard time on writing the piece. I had a hard time useing good word choice.
(3.) Iliked working on drawing the pieces the best because I really love to draw and use different medias to draw with. I also liked garage band and picking the music for our pieces.
(4.) If I could improve the project I would have more time to draw the paintings. I would also change the media questions to something like this: ” why did you choos this media or what did you like the best about yhis media. Other than that I think that this project was really great!
November 2nd, 2006 at 12:38 pm
I did really well on the voice recording. Because I Knew wat to say. But I strugled on the starting and stoping. Because I did not know what key to press. I enjoyed making the drawings the most.Because I have allways liked to draw. I should not studer as much.Because sometimes I get nervice and don’t know what to say. I needed to study more about the artist.
November 2nd, 2006 at 12:39 pm
I think I did okay, I made some mistakes.I had a tough time doing the recording because I hade a few stoping points and I did not stop.I loved making the jingles because we listened to different muisic and picked our favorite and best sounding to fit your recording. I think I could have done better by making better and detail my pantings.